All Comments on 'Christian College Sex Comedy Ch. 23'

And I'm still so happy!

Seriously, I have spent every night for the past month just checking the new stories, not seeing this one, and being disappointed.

to have another chapter. fun, mayhem and even more fun

a new chapter worth the wait

Sounds like Gabby stopped by the biker bar. But why? Who's she looking out for?

who the hell is keeping score of this guy scoring?

women pulling trains seems to be a popular subject on this site

but this guy, how does he keep track of all the women?

hell one woman was enough to totally discombobulate me!

I) it is a comedy; a screwball insane comedy.

II) sometimes Zane scores and sometimes...like the whole episode that started at the Mall and ended up with the two lawyers in his bed...that was all his fault...or wasn't he just trying to get some sleep?

III) I promise you, it gets worse for poor Zane - things like discussions among the ladies that they pump him up with Viagra and Nuvigil and use him like community property.

IIII) I would like to think sex with Zane is not scott-free; it is often now woman he wants to be with but which woman gets to him first.

IV) the woman Zane wants to be with is Christina, so the guy is not getting everything he wants and how Christina reacts to is antics is relevant. This comes up in a later chapter.

I have no clue on how often Zane has scored. Maybe the girls should mark him, like hash marks or the notches on a warclub.

Anyway, Chapters 25 through 30 are with the editor, I swear, and Chapter 31 is about half way done. I've taken a tiny timeout to get three different stories completed as well. (My technique is to write part of a story until the creative fire dims then pick up another story - right now I have a dozen stories in varying degrees of completion as I like to have at least 6K words and a good closing point. This style sucks but my mind is fickle bitch that medicine can't seem to regulate.)

Its nice to see how he altered himself in the situation.

Its a bit much sometimes when he's constantly being controlled this way and that way to see how 'he' handles dealing with things, so it was nice in this moment when they actually listened.

Hope to see some more of it

JC

"Zane," Iona gave an angelic smile, "you have to do what you feel comfortable with but this is a matter of trust between us."

And the trust that Zane has put into her, which is far to much to list quickly, is being rewarded by her teasing him and making fun of him. This, remember, is after he agreed to no-sex for 'her' benefit.

Trust is a two way street and his trust in the science club is continually getting abused, manipulated and they think its ok because they're paying him with sex, or so they believe they are.

£it's ok, we're helping him have sex, its fine." Ignoring the part where Zane doesn't need their help to get that. So, they're abusing his trust, giving him nothing, all th ewhile expecting him to behave according to their dogma.

That will come back when Zane has a bad day and bite them severely. He isn't super smart, but he is linguistically gifted and has a head for politics that will come through when his kind and caring attitude gets pushed juuuuuuust a little too far I recon. Or perhaps i'm hoping.

JC

And just to reaaaally outline my irritation with the female cast.

Girl doesn't want to have sex.

Guy restrains girl, teases her, gets her aroused and then pushes oral sex on her.

Rape

Girl doesn't want to have sex.

Guy ignores her wishes and fondles or does 'inadvertent' actions to cause stimulation.

Sexual assault.

I know its perhaps extreme, but these girls are not respecting his choices. and if he did the same to them it would be MASSIVELY different. That, is the crux of what I foresee as being calamitous for these girls if they aren't careful and push Zane one too many times.

JC

Oh yeah ... the amount of femdom in this tale ... yep.

The double standard of what a girl can get away with pushing sex on a man versus a man on a woman is another subject I like to explore.

JC, I hope you are doing fine and taking care of yourself,

James aka FinalStand