by xstacy231
this was better than the normal run. Good luck in the contest!
Lesbian stories aren't my usual fare but you did a good job. Good luck!
I hope there's going to be a continuation where more sex is involved. That first part was good, but not erotic enough for me.
wonderful tale~
good luck and happy holidays
my erotic tale
Thank you so much for writing a story like that i was so nice, it wasnt just about sex but about love.i wish you luck in writing more stories.
As I Wipe My Tears From My Face. I Think 25,580 Views With Only6 Comments, And 2 Favorites. I Quickly Add This To My Favorites,And Begin This Comment.
How I've Missed This Story Over The Last Couple Of Years. I Can Not Explain. But I Can State Whole Heartedly I LOVE This Story. I Wish That You Had Or Will Continue The Story. But Thats Your Decison.
Kisses
For a sweet, beautiful, tender love story. The absence of sex made it different than what's usually found here, but I loved it!
One minor quibble---if you continue this, please write the word 'Christmas' in full and not the clumsy 'Xmas'. Okay, moan over. What did I really think? That this is one of the sweetest and warmest short stories I have read on this site. You deserve every one of the five stars I've given you, Xstacy. Now do all your readers a favour and write some more stories full of warmth, whether about Diana and Rachel or new characters.
Brian