by greatowl
This was a great story. I couldn't even get through it before it made me blow my load. Great job!!!
Brilliant story mate! You put good effort and thought into the story, didn't make Christina a complete slut and wrote some hot sex scenes. A quality style of descriptive writing. Excellent work mate, A+ :)
Unlike the typical Celebrity story, you really put some thought into the plot and setting. The picture of life in the music business and on the road feels genuine and plausible. And, as a Christina fan, I'm grateful you portray her as the talented musician she is, not just the stereotypical slut-bomb. Plus, Hot Sex! Great job.
i love the way the story is constructed and all the backstory this is by far the overall best story i have read
i hope there are more stories like it or an even better part 2
that was the most amazing story ive ever read and theres nothing else i can say. It made me long to be there!!!!!!
You should be writing novels! This is the best story I've read on here yet.. Looking forward to reading more from you :)