All Comments on 'Christine and Me Pt. 01'

Good premise.

MUCH too rushed.

Sex simply zooms.

Needs to slow down.

Needs lots of her teasing him before the blowjob. With her hands. With her mouth. With her tits. With her ass.

Two stars.

Great start although you did seem to jam everything into this short story. You need to take your time and think about a story you would like to read and how it is paced. I look forward to reading more from you since you obviously have the talent, ow you need the experience.