All Comments on 'Christmas Bachelor Auction Pt. 02'

by BigMadStork

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TLB1981TLB1981over 5 years ago

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
OMG

I an so glad you added another chapter. This needs to continue but please dont make us wait another 8 months.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Still confused

Who the fuck is Karen? I must have missed something. Even if I did miss a sentence or two about Karen, better back stories or more references to them would be nice.

mpg_guympg_guyover 5 years ago
Lazy anonymous

Yep - you missed it. Read the first story. She’s the “chef” who decided to stay cause she has no other family and ended up snuggling during the movie with Anthony. The back story was fine, you’re just too lazy to figure things out. Even too lazy to login or create a profile. Hate anonymous bs.

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
AWESOME CHAPTER 2

Hope you continue the story.

Best sex game EVER

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

A beautiful and romantic tale.

Very nice Mrs. Claus ;)

Great sequel.

The whole story feels like it was written by a woman. And surprisingly correct and complete. The later stories seem much worse worked out.

Am I right and it's not one author but several?

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 2 years ago

I guess I didn't comment on this one before even though I know I read it back then. I may be the OMG comment but that doesn't sound like me, But it could be. either way change my old 4 to a 5 ✨ and Will add I can't wait to re-read part 3 to complete this tale. Thanks for Sharing.

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Yes, it's been a while since I published. I had a bit of a writer's funk and have survived. I just published a short story (for me), and more will follow.