by BigMadStork
I read the first part quite some time ago and don't know why I waited so long to finish the last two parts. I like that it was all tied up but I definitely wanted details about Mom and Jane with Bill that you mentioned at the end of part one. I would love to read about Donnas' friend being rescued.
I loved this story I'm not so sure about bringing the abusive father into it but bringing in santa and Lyn for lots of group sex with Bill and his sisters and all his friends could be alot of fun. Please keep writing I really liked this series
killer story love it, but would love to know if they did save the girl and how the relation ship worked out. great Christmas read any way thank you
A beautiful and romantic tale.
Very nice Mrs. Claus ;)
Great sequel.
The whole story feels like it was written by a woman. And surprisingly correct and complete. The later stories seem much worse worked out.
Am I right and it's not one author but several?
Q: Donna says her brother is the only one. Was, is and will be. But she was not a virgin. Who took her virginity?
Enjoyed the story but would like to hear more of the Donna, Bill and Jane futures. Let me see if I got this straight, Bill got Donna, her mother and Karen pregnant. The tale would be interesting going forward. Well done 5 stars
Still have no idea how Donna got the 150k for the auction instead of using it for a better life she blows it on the auction
That was a great series. I never imagined i would read erotica that included Santa and his wife. I have to say that I really enjoyed it. Very well written. To me, themes that include hopelessness, redemption and joy are three ingredients of a great story. Thank you for including them in this wonderful tail. ;-p
@anonymous that wondered about the $150k, I am assuming mrs Claus had something to do with that… Perhaps she allowed her to bid as much as she wanted/needed, as it was for a good cause, but couldn’t have any of it herself…
so wens the next chapter about donnas friend i would like to see that and idk bout the dad he seems like a pos id write him off and out lol