All Comments on 'Christmas Bride'

Great stuff. Very well told and great first time sex too!

Good premise.

Bur sex was too rushed.

There needed to be much more in the way of preliminaries/foreplay before he got down to eating her pussy.

Needed lots more dialog as they were going, step by step, from kissing to fucking.

Needed more in the way of wonderment of each about the other's body.

Needed much more in the way of her admiring, touching, playing with his cock -- and his balls.

Needed her getting confirmation that what she was doing to his cock felt good.

Needed her seeing and questioning his pre-cum.

So many more things.

Four stars.

Sweet little story!

5

An outstanding story. I hope they were together and in love clear up to today.

I thought it was great. The buildup was just alright, but they payoff was really good. 5*

Really good.

Beautiful story. True love

Loved this story with the

Sweetness

I was expecting all-too-familiar fraying pounding and screaming. Instead we get honest enjoyment. Simple human pleasure.

Contentment

Thank you