All Comments on 'Christmas Cookies'

Pretty good but a little repetitive. Thank you.

OMG, what a beautiful, amazing story! You have some real talent and a knack for developing your characters and their lives in a way that makes one almost feel drunk reading your story. Sorry my comment is anonymous, but I don't dare create an account here or I'd be in big trouble, Literotica is my horribly guilty pleasure, but my other half doesn't like me reading these stories. I hope that you continue writing in the future and look forward to reading more from you as soon as your able to upload another story. Absolutely wonderful, keep it up and don't change a thing!

excellent story! would love to see a part 2

Wow this was outstanding!! Looking forward to more of your work

Wow

This was absolutely incredible. The love between them was so beautiful and your writing is so good. I desperately want a sequel with marriage and babies!

thank you for this amazing vanilla bro-sis romance, without putting other people in-between them.. just them together, nobody else.. 5/5

You reminded me of how completely in love I am with my wife, more than reminded, immersed and re-experienced. Thank you.

SorellinaTiama, that is an interesting name that you chose for your self because it means, as you know, "Little sister I love you" in Italian. I'm fascinated because I'm Italian and I'm in love with my younger sister. It's a very difficult situation, as you can imagine. Anyway, I enjoyed your story very much and gave it 5 stars. Mainly because of the love and tenderness between the siblings that you conveyed in your story. For a first submission, it is great. It is grammatical, with very good spelling. Of course, anything can be improved, and I do see room for improvement, but I believe that will come with time, if you are serious about improving. Please continue to write in any genre because you certainly have talent. Good luck to you. Ciao.

This was beautiful, thank you.

Great story! I loved it!

Very nice first story. 5/5

What a great story. Absolutely beautiful if it was autobiographical; anticipating more if it was not. Please keep writing.

Excellent story!!! Please do not quit writhing. You have talent!!!!

That was freaking awesome! It had all of the qualities that I enjoy in a good brother/sister story. The most important thing was an actual love for each other and not just sexual lust. There are so many times that I read an incest story only for it to end up being a fuck fest without any emotional commitment between the brother and sister. I hate that! So a million thanks to you for catering to my interests. The fact that you based this in Texas was the icing on the cake. So thanks for that as well. I'm disappointed that a five is the maximum vote that I can give you. it deserves so much more than that! 5/5

How awsome to find a story teller on here.... Well done

Well done! Love and real emotion before they loose themselves in each other. Awesome story, please continue this one!

Really good first story

Amazing job for your first story! Please write more

its a rare treat that you get to read stories like this that is merged into more of love than just meaningless sex. Awesome job!! looking for more from you 5/5 no brainer!!

And so they waltz off into a fairy tale world. Nice story full on unspoken problems at the end. Too short of and ending.

Fantastic! Your writing is excellent. More stories please. Continue with Ro and Jason's story. I want to know what happens to them. Send them to Japan. God you are so good at what you do and you look fantastic.

Good story. You can write well and your pussy looks great and inviting. I'd love to stick my tongue in it and lick you to an orgasem.

You definitely use descriptive words. However, the burn is slower than what is needed for this story. I stopped reading when I got the words "Bare Pussy." I am a guy who is not ever going to be into next time sex with prickly stubble. Don't do that "Bare Pussy" stuff in your future stories, I promise, your ratings will drop.

For just a single story in your library it is a very good read. I hope to see more from you in the future

Loved it

That was awesome! I liked the slow burn, built the seduction up nicely.

Yes, please do write more. I enjoy your style.

Really good, but i think she should get pregnant of course, complete the romance, start a family.

Your first ever story, and it is already this good. Please make more

it was 5 star worthy but sadly like most stories like this, she should have gotten knocked up, pregnant with her brothers baby, even getting married too. that is 5 stars. but a second story to this end would be very nice indeed.