All Comments on 'Christmas Eve'

Wow! A great fantasy, written fairly well, but maybe a little too rushed. The scene could be drawn out a bit more and the frustration of the men could be highlighted more. Maybe drawing attention to bulges in their pants, wet spots forming, heavy breathing, flushed faces, etc.

Or better yet, they could choose a "lucky guy" while the others look on in envy...

I would love to have been there! Like the story...now one for the men, please!

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