All Comments on 'Christmas Love and Sacrifice Pt. 03'

by Pars001

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Anonymous5 months ago

interesting twist, but you definitely need an editor to help review and fix your writing.

Boyd Percy 5 months ago

Exciting conclusion!

Anonymous5 months ago

You show good promise in executing your ideas. Remember, the first 10,000 are the hardest!

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