All Comments on 'Christmas Party Date'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very, very good!!

Well up to your usual high standards!

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UnfetteredMaleUnfetteredMaleover 11 years ago
Great work

Really outstanding and hot - nicely done!

john1946john1946over 11 years ago
OK

Now that was a 5 for sure. I've been fortunate to be at some parties like tht and a couple of the games I knew......Oh those were the days.....Still are in moderation.....Thanks for a fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Congratulations

That was a great story. Well planned, characters developed nicely and written dynamically. Very erotic. Thank you. One quibble; the past tense of "drag" is "dragged". "Drug" is a medication, either legal or illicit. But keep those stories coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Damn Good Stuff, Story.

I would use "drug" also if I were writing the story :) It is shown as "dialect" past tense of drag in one of my dictionaries, and as "nonstandard" past tense and past participle in two others. But more than that, it is the way I grew up using it :) Dragged works for me in the third person but drug in the first, in my common usage. [left coast U.S.]

I really liked this story, Story. Mostly a stroke story but with class and a little developement too. Lynn

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More

Have you ever thought of turning this into a series? Like what happens on the shopping trip and at the office?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!

I would love for this to become a series! Tell us more, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
None of the usual seduction

This story had none of the usual seduction - just sex from start

Fred78Fred78over 7 years ago
Loved it

If you going to put your toes in, dive in head first! I love your writing style. The only hard thing for me is after he takes the plunge, regrets are usually after, not during, he had thought of this before, now he is enjoying it, let the guilt come the next afternoon, or when he is alone again. He would not bring the girls down during the party, not his style.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago

Loved it!! Wish they had those kinds of Christmas parties where I used to work! Please keep writing!!

linnearlinnearalmost 5 years ago
Great Writing

As always you tell one amazing story after another and always leave me wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why dont you mention people's name? instead of calling her husband and my wife, constantly? What is wrong with you?

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...