All Comments on 'Christmas Present Pt. 02'

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tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 7 years ago
Excellent story in desperate need of some serious proof-reading/editing

Love your imagination, that's one hot story, but it's let down a bit by the many mistakes in the text.

I suggest looking around for an editor or at least some proof-readers.

Looking forward to reading many more stories from you!

dreamer3366dreamer3366over 7 years ago
Fetish?

At the rate she's having piercings done, I think she's out of control. The category should be changed from anal to fetish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Love the decent

I absolutely love these kind of stories where wife descends into slutdom and tattoos and piercings. Please continue with more visible tattoos my personal fetish and may be a shaved side under cut extreme hair cut . If minx could take over her life it would be cool thanks again i love these stories please continue.

Best regards

Fred

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 7 years ago
Corset piercings

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corset_piercing#

Ic anyone is interested in them, read the article first

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please continue or write a new story I keep being drawn back to this story. Maybe it could start to impact on her work and social life?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
1*

illiterate shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
5

annony is full of shit He fucking loves these stories. He reads them all!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
re: annony is full of shit

Since you're annony, you posted that you are full of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Next chapter please!

I have an absolute piercing fetish. I totally am in love with Minx and her sexy clothes and all those piercings. This is totally my kind of story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
great read

great story wheres the rest keep going....

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