All Comments on 'Christmas Shopping Ch. 04 Pt. 02'

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lrogerblrogerbover 10 years ago
Merry Christmas

If I would have had a present like that even anytime I would have played with it all month. Real good story keep it up. I want to fuck my daughter too.

dirty_old_man74dirty_old_man74over 10 years ago
Bravo

Excellent finale. Ended on just the right tone-loving and naughty. I was scared you would get too dirty or she would give up too much to daddy, this didn't need anal or anything above and beyond just fun loving sex. Great story. Can't wait to see what story you go to next.

phonsephonseover 10 years ago
Needs another chapter

I agree that mom should be included. This definitely should not be the end. Hope you can come up with more.

Papa1957Papa1957over 9 years ago
extremely hot I can't wait to read the others

Girl you a knack for bringing your stories to life

jpl7490jpl7490over 8 years ago
Like painting pictures

Well really more like making a movie inside my mind, wow, what a mind blower that was too. Your words flow and take me along with you I love the way you bring the story to life, it's something special and wonderful

Jean

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 8 years ago

Jesus, this is so fucking HOT! Brilliant descriptive passages, hot and slutty girl can't get enough thick cock it seems. Love it!

InsigniaInsigniaover 8 years ago
Usually Holiday tales

Do little to either make Christmas more appealing or a keep an Ebeneezer like me interested for more than a page. This is truly an exception and had me plumpin' a chubby stocking stuffer throughout. The characters are all likeable and you avoid turning Daddy into a cartoonish cuckold. Mom sizzles with a sexuality that is raw, pure and primal. Would love to meet Sue and read about how she handles her own boy's 18th birthday. Regardless, of which way you decide to go, know that you have a fan who got a White Christmas a bit early.

QuazziQuazzialmost 7 years ago
Christmas may be over but I really hope there's more!

Loved this series but I hope to see more of this family. Especially when her cousin turns 18! ;-3

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