All Comments on 'Christmas Sweater'

Such an eloquently written story. The flow of the story was smooth and kept me wanting to know what happened next.

5 stars, love it, so cute!

Thank you for the comment and I'm super glad you liked it!

Very well thought out, written and presented. Keep up the excellent work.

That was an awesome story. Great job

What a delightful story. The tease was as much fun as the consummation

We are introduced to Alex, a self absorbed thoroughly unlikable character, then we suddenly switch to Dennis, a vacuous I individual who is aware enough to know he has never seen this gas station before, but quickly forgets that fact.

I could not read any further.

I just love happy endings. Thanks for a wonderful story.

That was a beautifully crafted piece of literature. It is one of those stories that I didn’t only enjoy reading it but felt really happy after having read it. I don’t come across many stories that give me that type of feeling so thank you very much for taking the time to create it and allow me the honour of reading it.

Mitchell

Look, I don't normally spend a second on transformation stories, but this... this I read every word. I prefer reading CD/TV romance with an actual story not based solely on fucking. I think I liked this one so much because of the trepidation and wonder as each moment of the day went by, and our lovers learned more and more who they and their better half were in this new life they were exploring together.

I thought it was a lovely romance and I could step away until I had read every word written.

Excellent effort Ctus! I wouldn't change a single character you typed.

Bravo! Bravo I say!

Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with us.

;)

Brenda

Almost forgot, I did give it 5 Stars as well-which I RARELY do here ;)

Well written - I felt happy as well - a good feeiing to have in these times - great job! 5 *****

Burning Love

I enjoyed this story! The beginning showed the ugly side of two lives shattered but the gift of a sweater completely changed the outcome of all families involved! Lexi and Dennis became a love affair for the ages! Ctus well written!

The story was well written. The transition from current to future was good. I did give it 5 stars, but the one thing that got me was the continual use of their names. It took a lot away from the story. Try using pronouns in place of the character's name. It will make for a much better read.

Thank you all for your (mostly) positive comments.

To the last comment on the pronouns, thanks for overlooking that and voting five stars.

I certainly noticed that pronoun issue now and will carry the suggestion forward in my writing. I appreciate the constructive comment.

I just want to thank everyone for over 20,000 views, all of the ratings, and comments. It really means a lot to me that people like the story. I hope to become a better writer over time. Thank you again!

I love love. This is all I ever wanted, to be a girl in love. Thank you for allowing me to believe.