All Comments on 'Christmas with Ivy'

You are incredible! A literary genius!

would like to have more stories of these characters

So much fun. Loved it. Thanks author!

Hot n sexy tale, eager for more of these 3 sexy people and whatever happens next. babies maybe?

Pretty damn hot. Thanks for sharing

I/T is normally hot, but you make it public, all the taboo heat just evaporates and it turns into another weird sharing story. Misstep on this one.

Good read. Good character development and story line. These characters should be used to continue their escapades.

Loved this story. Was super fun and hot to read!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

WOW!!!!!

Another great story by Shakna he is a expert at this subject. I kind of hope this would go into more chapters, but it probably won’t. Still, think on it please, if there is any more on these three in your mind write for us.

Scores 5/5

please continue

Oh hell yeah! I absolutely love my Christmas present. Thank you, brother! You really made my day! 98/100

More, More, More please. Hot little story. I think he must take those two back to the Desert with him.

Top notch fun down under. Love it.

Anonymous Annoyances - I'm bisexual. If you find that gross... Probably shouldn't be reading my writing, eh?

Decent writing, but it's wasted on stupid gay crap like this. If you acted like an adult you might write something worth reading.

This one needs a part two. Really liked it.

Needs another chapter. Enjoyed the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++

A wonderfully written story.

The only note, no sex scene with Rachel.

Great dialogues. You can feel the calories of Australian English.

One of my favorite authors.

And I love the brother/sister incest scenes, lesbo and bi women, threesome love fmf.

I don't like the gay and bi men, though. When I imagine a swollen, unshaven face next to me on the pillow in the morning, it immediately makes me sick. How nice that there are women in the world! I'm a man, but at heart I'm a 1000% lesbian.

Can’t wait to see chapter 2

More??? Of the best friend, the two girls, of the promised morning after? C'mon, we want details!

Very well written ^-^

I like the poly inclusion, as well. Longer lasting relationships between several people, though I understand the less romantic focus in what's essentially porn :/

I hope you make more!

Life is going to become more complicated eventually a decision is going to have to be made he isn't going to be able to fuck 1 without the other getting jealous it's impossible even in a fantasy story

IVY IS A BITCH NO WONDER HER BOYFRIEND TREATED HER THAT WAY. JUST ANOTHER IMMATURE CHARACTER! THEN BRINGING HER FRIEND FOR HER BRO5HER AND 3 OF THEM GOING AT IT JUST FUCKED UP THIS STORY!!

Ivy is a stupid bitch for fixing her slut friend Rachel for her brother. Needed another chapter where Rachel stopped bro from having any relation with Ivy

Most of your stories are brother-sister-friend and reads like its written by a kid!! Immature to a scale. Why the fuck does a sister who is in love with her brother, bring a friend a long!! These are not sustainable relationships just short term fuck sessions

Stop bringing others into a two person relationship, nothing more hurtful than feeling that a third person is necessary.

They are called a couple because there are 2 people.

Lousy plot and storyline.......... just plain weird....... seriously did you really think this was a good idea....... not erotic at all just two stupid girls who don't have a clue............. what a waste of reading time.......... If this is the way you write not interested in following you at all. Pathetic.........

I love this story. Rereading this story annually is becoming a Christmas tradition for me lol. Don't listen to these anonymous shit posts. I'm pretty sure most of them are from the same person; why they've decided to devote so much time hating on this is beyond me. It would have been nice to see a second....

Laughing at how thas anonymous pig keeps coming back month after month to reread this story and write another seething, misogynistic and homophobic comment every time.

Definitely loved this one. Can't wait to see Rachel's creampie.