All Comments on 'Christmas with My Cousin'

by Will2102

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pretty good until she got manipulative and threatened to blackmail him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep it going

LapinatorLapinatorover 1 year ago

He never answered her question if he wanted her. This uncertainty was really disctracting, maybe he could enlighten us in another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a surprise your cock is twice the size of everyone else. That is a narrative tool of a lazy writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

4 Stars. I might have given you a five, but when she threatened him, you lost me and that fifth star. Don't stop, try again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lost me as a reader when the 8 inch cock made an appearance.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

5 Stars! YES! That was hot - please keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Somewhat lacking in credibility. The writer obviously doesn't know where a cumshot comes from; only about 5% is from the balls.

JackMeHoff6971JackMeHoff6971over 1 year ago

I think this story had a bit of messy start but finished a bang.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 1 year ago

More please, she wants him to be hers and hopefully he has knocked her up already and they stay together as a couple making more babies

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Looks like Santa clause might have two more babies to give Christmas presents to all across the world

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I just imagine in the future how there going to be able to tell the babies that they’re cousins and that they grandparents are related and are there great uncle’s and aunties and grandparents all rolled in to one .

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