All Comments on 'Christmas Wrapping'

by HLD

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Excellent story. good development, likeable characters, and hot. Let's not forget hot.

Thanks.

texcavemantexcavemanover 9 years ago
ho ho hoooo

Merry Christmas and a 5* to all!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Adorable. Funny, hot, sexy, realistic all at once. Fans of the song will love it. And it reminded me of my first time with the voluptuous woman I married. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Perfect Christmas tale. Thanks for submitting it.

jaycoxjaycoxover 9 years ago
Sweet and sexy

A fine Christmas tale, eroticism and sexual energy to spare. 5+ at least

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice sensual Christmas story!

I really enjoyed the part of the phone call with her parents during sex! Hillarious and showed that they really cared for each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Love all your stories...you have been missed!

jott50jott50over 9 years ago
GOOD JOB!!!

very nice story with a great ending. the beginning was a bit tedious but well worth it. 5*+

fantasiahottiefantasiahottieover 9 years ago
I freakin' loved it!!!

Fantastic story, good flow, awesome characters!! I want MORE!! Merry Christmas!!

ClunketyClunketyover 9 years ago

Great job! I loved it! 5 stars!

lilbit69lilbit69over 9 years ago
Absolutely wonderful

Loved the story! Loved the playfulness! Loved the humor! 5* May you have a wonderfully Merry Christmas! 🎄

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story - as usual

Welcome back, you were missed during your time away. As always you have the best characters going. Please keep writing and submitting them here.

Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
Another Winner.

Great little story; so well written. Hope this author enjoys writing as much as this reader and I’m sure others enjoy his works.

omni_satisfieromni_satisfierover 5 years ago
great narration

@HLD Hey! Its a great narration...it just flowed...The almost monologue in the first page didn't even stop me for a second..."chore-gasms" and other things like that are great...Loved it

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