by HLD
@HLD Hey! Its a great narration...it just flowed...The almost monologue in the first page didn't even stop me for a second..."chore-gasms" and other things like that are great...Loved it
Great little story; so well written. Hope this author enjoys writing as much as this reader and I’m sure others enjoy his works.
Welcome back, you were missed during your time away. As always you have the best characters going. Please keep writing and submitting them here.
Loved the story! Loved the playfulness! Loved the humor! 5* May you have a wonderfully Merry Christmas! 🎄
Fantastic story, good flow, awesome characters!! I want MORE!! Merry Christmas!!
very nice story with a great ending. the beginning was a bit tedious but well worth it. 5*+
I really enjoyed the part of the phone call with her parents during sex! Hillarious and showed that they really cared for each other.
A fine Christmas tale, eroticism and sexual energy to spare. 5+ at least
Adorable. Funny, hot, sexy, realistic all at once. Fans of the song will love it. And it reminded me of my first time with the voluptuous woman I married. Thanks!
Excellent story. good development, likeable characters, and hot. Let's not forget hot.
Thanks.