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All Comments on 'Chronicles of Heather Maureen Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Was it necessary to detail out a dress code in the story? Just seems like it takes valuable story telling space away and kinda bores the reader. That space could be used for character development, describing the scene or mood more, things that pull the reader into the story. Just a suggestion. 💋

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too short

And didn't really move the story along much. More a filler piece than anything. Still looking forward to more.

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Passive to submissive transvestite who enjoys wearing slutty, sexy, lacy lingerie and displaying it whenever possible. Love having to wear a short French maid outfit and will even clean and cook while doing so.