by Agnol
Wow Great to you see you writing again ! Hope you have more stories planed out!
Love your take on mothers and sons specially when there is a pregnancy at the end!
Would love to read another chapter. Include the pastor's activities and a couple of the girls he's involved with. Get the mom's to perform for their boys.
Great start. I like the fact that the Mom's are all involved with their sons. I had an opportunity to do so, but unfortunately, I let it go by . My bad. Hope you keep going with this story.
It's always a great pleasure to see you've written another story, and this one does not disappoint in the least! Great premise- that a preacher leads his flock straight into his sex-obsessed view of the world! And i suppose he's doing no harm, just helping them to unburden themselves, to nurture their children and to satisfy their own primitive drive to copulate and fornicate and drink from the jizz of life!
You write with such verve and panache! It's an easy peazy stroke fest for me- i delight in how you build the drama, building, building until the sparks fly and the flies drop and the zippers unzip and the panties are shimmied out of and the boxers tent and surrender their prodigious man-meat! Damn, Margo! Your pen name looks French- perhaps this us why you approach your writing with such 'joie de vivre'! Thanks for writing- i think i'll recover
please use proper tags.. ntr . cheating .. etc.. the pastor stuff ruined everything.. both mothers were the worst! 1/5
the instant you smell the reek of a harem story, it's time to pull the rip cord. this is one of those times.
I loved this story. Even as an atheist I enjoyed the naughty religious aspect of it. I don’t give 5 stars easily but this one is five stars. Usually the very large penis kills the story for me but the writing in this one was so good I had to keep reading. Curious how your other mom and son stories are.
I'm glad that Pastor Rick told Elaine and Margie that God wanted them to fuck their sons. I would have loved to be either David or Luke. I really enjoyed the tit play; I've always been a breast man. I didn't like Pastor Rick getting so involved in the story at the end. I would have liked more mother/son fucking, since they had just started doing it. I still gave you 5 Stars.
Not my cup of tea. I am not against Mother/Son incest, but I dislike the manipulative aspect. Also, it seems that Margie is completely ignoring her own son and now is going to take on Elaine's son. I guess you plan on a follow up since you seemed to mostly focus on Elaine/Luke. 3 out 5 stars.
Nagyon jó történet. Folytathatnád az anyukák és fiuk a lelkésszel és a pomponlánnyal.
He, she, he, she, his, her. That's all I kept reading all throughout this garbage with only few scant references to mother-son relationship. Fuckin' idiot! Incest erotica is not about writing lengthy paragraphs about the mechanics of sex between two people, rather it's to continually highlight the incest aspect by frequent references to their familial bonds by using phrases such as her son, his mother etc instead of these generic bland third person he she crap. It sounds like most of these idiot writers get ahead of themselves whenever the sex scenes between mother and son comes up.
He best parts of this story are where Luke changes Elaine by eating her pussy and then she rides him and when Marjory’s son calls her out for beiny a true cocksucking slut make this story worth reading. The school nurse situation was a nice bonus but it all seemed to unravel after that. A very sexy alternative reality! Thx
Its a good story well written and it catches or drags in your attention until you have to switch pages lol
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So instead of a mother son story this is more about what the pastor gets. One son is left out of it 3⭐️ story