All Comments on 'Church of Purification'

OK, Original premise, Doc. At least, I've not seen stories about churches like this before. Might have kept me in church if this existed in the real world (incest aside - that's strictly fantasy). And it feels like this is the start of a series? Gave it 4/5 ⭐for originality, but it didn't blow my socks off (pun intended). Keep us in the loop if you do want to write a series based on this 😁

I do hope there's more to tell of this story.

please keep this going!!

Where is the church and can I join? Great story.

more of this story and these characters please

Great premise for a story. And so many directions it can go if you do a follow up.

Great first chapter.

Hope there are many more like your other tales.

If there was only a real church like this….I’d be there every time the doors were open !

Hugely original and exciting! I echo those requesting further exploration of this “church” and these characters. Excellent five star tale.

Fantastic, hopefully much more to cum.

Fantastic story!! Keep writing.

Great story. Definitely hoping for more with this premise.

Funny, I almost never had this happen to me. Oh wait there was this one time. Great start. Hope you continue with the story. I could see an affair happening between Joey and Mrs. Brenke and Brittany.

Great start! Can''t wait to see what happens with Heidi when the twins visit!

Thank you.

I agree great start. I hope to read a lot more about this group and just think they have the whole college thing to go through. Lots of possibilities, Doc! Your fans await!

Cheers

SAGE

Nice creative writing. Hoping you continue this into a nice little series.

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica.

Nice keep going

Great story! Hope for more.

Great story. In the Seattle area there was once a "church" that gave hand jobs as part of the "service". It was simply a front for a massage parlor. If you gave a larger "donation", you could be orally blessed.

Loved it! Hope you keep this story going!

Great story and very hot.

The twins would have been more nervous in front of a crowd, especially being virgins and the teacher would definitely not told a student to push her head down on him if it was for purification.

However, still looking forward to more. 5 stars.

Follow up: the story doesn't really tell what the purification is about or why its a year long, etc. More information could be shared in the next chapter.