All Comments on 'Cinder Elli'

This was a good story. Not sure why you posted this here, but I am glad. I like the story premise and the ending. Its nice to see how a villains' plans work against them.

I really liked this. It's of much higher quality than most other stories here, I think you should post this somewhere else where it might get more attention... Because it really deserves it

I love this. I especially love the description of Elli's transformation. I hope you write another story like this! Perhaps with futa? Either way, hope to see that delightful descriptive skill again!

Excellent Story! I absolutely adored it. While I am cis gender, and straight, it still means a lot to me. I read The

Marvelous Land of Oz in the 6th grade. It is the story of a boy Tip who is actually Ozma, the lost princess of Oz, though he is unaware of this until near the end of the book. I am not trans, but I have had daydreams, ever some reading that book, about being able to transform into girl, or now woman. I am happy and in the right body, but those daydreams have never left me. At 54 I still have actual dreams where I am transformed into a woman, and those daydreams and dreams mean something important to me that isn't a fetish or in any way sexual. Anyway, your fairytale was wonderful and made me happy.