All Comments on 'Cinder Girl Ch. 01'

by peaches07

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well if she's not property

Then why not walk out the door and down the road, never to return. This made little sense, even for fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I liked it...

cuntakintecuntakintealmost 9 years ago
It has potential

I think this has potential. I just hope that characters are dynamic and the storyline isn't cliche, since there's a lot of auction-related plots out there. Anyway, it seemed pretty good! Can't wait to read more.

qnm8qnm8almost 9 years ago
YAY!

I love all your stories and I was worried you had stopped posting. I'm glad your started a new series! And like always, I can't wait for more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Well, well, well

Off to an intriguing start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Can't wait for Ch. 02

Glad to see you back. Looking forward to Gabby's adventures.

maddictmaddictalmost 9 years ago
Nice version of Cinderella.

Unless your the virgin. Will the ending be as nice as the story I know.? Instead of a glass slipper, how about a glass .....

Horseman68Horseman68over 5 years ago
Great Start.

Looking forward to finding out how this evolves. Great start.

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