All Comments on 'Cinder Girl Ch. 01'

Looking forward to finding out how this evolves. Great start.

Unless your the virgin. Will the ending be as nice as the story I know.? Instead of a glass slipper, how about a glass .....

Glad to see you back. Looking forward to Gabby's adventures.

Off to an intriguing start.

I love all your stories and I was worried you had stopped posting. I'm glad your started a new series! And like always, I can't wait for more! :)

I think this has potential. I just hope that characters are dynamic and the storyline isn't cliche, since there's a lot of auction-related plots out there. Anyway, it seemed pretty good! Can't wait to read more.

I liked it...

Then why not walk out the door and down the road, never to return. This made little sense, even for fiction.