All Comments on 'Cindy'

This is a great story, and hope there is a follow-on. Rates a 5+++++++++

This is at the very top of you best works. The emotions were presented and worked well.Thank you for the story.

But not your best. Rated it a 4. Good character development, but you seemed reticent to have the characters move forward with their sexuality... and other times, they seemed to move really quickly.

I marginally agree with Apallo99 re. an occasional rush, then the action slows down. One partner offers suggestions/advice which seems to require immediate series of phone calls for confirmation and validation then more reassurance. From experience I support the author's added precautions for safty's sake; cooperation to assure all players are on the same page and ready to move forward, or step back and reconsider is paramount. The emotional balance is difficult to monitor and maintain; to rush is asking for trouble and pain for All. Story is not the most erotic, but it definitely is a superior example of successful introduction into a new adventure ... With secure assistants.