All Comments on 'Cindy, My Love Ch. 01'

by Sparky78

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tinman69stinman69sover 17 years ago
Great stroy!!

I found myself in your story, or what I wished was myself. That was a good story and was very easy to relate to. Please write more about this affair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Well Written!!!!

The plot really unfolded nicely. You weren't overly dramatic with the descriptions but you kept the eroticism there. I am looking forward to future chapters.

mrpervy46mrpervy46over 17 years ago
Can't Wait

Great story, can't wait for them to solve the "Jennifer" problem. I bet Cindy is prenaunt.

klaxxklaxxover 16 years ago
Great story, but...

Where's the black dress, man? As of today, no black dress on your profile page, dude. Tsk tsk. You're forgiven, though, because your story is well written and smokin' hot!

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