by Sparky78
Where's the black dress, man? As of today, no black dress on your profile page, dude. Tsk tsk. You're forgiven, though, because your story is well written and smokin' hot!
Great story, can't wait for them to solve the "Jennifer" problem. I bet Cindy is prenaunt.
The plot really unfolded nicely. You weren't overly dramatic with the descriptions but you kept the eroticism there. I am looking forward to future chapters.
I found myself in your story, or what I wished was myself. That was a good story and was very easy to relate to. Please write more about this affair.