All Comments on 'Cindy's Journey Ch. 01'

On board for this journey. Nice start to your first (?) story. Tense, erotic not to mention poignant. Looking forward to next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Good. That's a good way to start things out. I too have a tough time figuring out how to start a story. Usually my first chapters are just the introductions to the characters and then the subsequent chapters really get into the story.

Thanks for writing this and sharing. I do have to point out that Mindy became Mandy then Mindy then Mandy again for a few paragraphs.

Yes. I have corrected the typos, and submitted a revised version.

"I do have to point out that Mindy became Mandy then Mindy then Mandy again for a few paragraphs."

Yes, I have corrected my typos and submitted a revised version. Thanks so much for reading and rating everyone!