All Comments on 'Cindy's Young Dream Stud Ch. 01'

Excellent story! Visually written - like a porn in my mind. Look forward to the next installment of "Miss Cindy".

Loved the narrative and the dirty talk.Seems he has put into words the fantasy of most of the porn-lovers.It would have been better if Cindy had seduced and encouraged the boy to touch her boobs instead of his taking the initiative.

Looking forward to the next installment,but he should be careful with the typos and need not use the words that disgrace the natural consequences of fondling,stroking and a blow job.

Very hot story, loved it. I hope part two will include the girl friend.

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I think it was really well written but I could have done without all the 'mommy' this and 'mommy' that. But that's just a personal preference. I really loved the storyline and the characters were very hot.

Excellent story. Cannot wait for chapterr 2.

one of the hottest mature stories , please bring on part 2 with lots of titfucking and more facials !!!!

very well written, and introduces excellent characters. It needs chapter 2...

Hey dude!

That's an incredible story you have written down.

I'm looking foward to reading more of you. Thanks alot!

We are waiting for more...

Thanx!

Part 2, and 3, and 4...this is great stuff!

I like the subtitle "Mature woman turns massage into act of worship." It would be interesting if you took that concept further, and her her completely subservient to his body and his cock, ignoring anything about herself and truly worshiping him.

It has been over 12 months since you wrote this story it would be very good to see chapter 2 very soon. You could do chapter 2 of this one then follow it with chapter 2 of Connie's Summer Stallion. Very good stories keep up the good work.

this fine story needs chapter 2, and you're just the man to write it.

Absolutely fantastic. We are seeing forward to the next chapter.

Writing is NOT his thing ! "1*" .

Oh, how delicious. My cock is drooling and you are the reason why. I want Cindy. I want that young stud's horse meat. Cindy needs to be fucked hard all night long.

Do not care for the mommy talk. Two stars.