All Comments on 'Cinnamon and Ash'

by Princess_Roflcopter

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wyzrchkwyzrchkover 18 years ago
What a great story!

That was definitely an interesting theme. Great sex and love the power play. Thanks

WFEATHERWFEATHERover 18 years ago
Intriguing Concept, Excellent Writing

Sex as a form of magic in its own right is certainly an interesting concept. That this concept is contained within such a well-written piece makes this a truly beautiful first story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
wonderful!!!

absolutely wonderful in its description and simplicity

Magus_RoninMagus_Roninabout 14 years ago

I loved your story, a wonderful inversion of the classic demon sex stories. It also reminded me of a similar story I've had tumbling around in my head for some time, maybe I'll finally get around to finishing it sometime.

steelkat29steelkat29over 11 years ago
Very good!

I really enjoyed this! I love reading erotica but I really don't like it when authors use tasteless words to describe everything. I like your writing because is is simple yet powerful without words like cunt or pussy or dick in it. It's elegant almost. Have a read of my story if you would like to, it's also about a demon

steelkat29steelkat29over 11 years ago

I really enjoyed this! I love reading erotica but I really don't like it when authors use tasteless words to describe everything. I like your writing because is is simple yet powerful without words like cunt or pussy or dick in it. It's elegant almost. Have a read of my story if you would like to, it's also about a demon

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