All Comments on 'City Girl in the Desert'

Well done! Telling the story through such an unlikable narrator was a bold choice, but you pulled it off and did a great job of capturing her mindset. Thanks!

5 stars ,great work.

About 4 pages too long for my taste but many people here like the longer stories

Never saw the movie, but as I was reading all I could think of was "Shallow Hal" I'm thinking all she deserved would be 3".

Yikes! This story (brilliant, 5 stars) brought back memories of a girl I dated three times my freshman year back in the Middle Ages. It took me that long to realize she wasn't putting on an act, but actually thought that way. Two years later a fraternity brother who was almost as bad got together with her, and later married her. No one else could figure him out. A few years later, he either was struck by lightning or tripped and knocked himself unconscious, but grew himself another pair of balls, and divorced her.