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Edrich stepped forward, bowing slightly. "Your Majesty," his deep voice barely audible. Emera stood even more erect, noticing Edrich looked strange. He lifted his eyes to her before they glazed over as he fell forward, collapsing out of reality.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 9 years agoand am rationing my enjoyment, one chapter a day.
My complements author.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI can't explain how much I love this story!! I don't want it to end. What a good writer!
mistyafternoonover 11 years agoCouldn't believe the harsh comments on the first couple chapters I think a mistake in spelling or the meaning of a word is really just petty considering the fact that your story had me so intrigued from the start I knew what you said and meant and keep it up for the true believers that live literotica and love it
Anonymousover 11 years agoThis is definitely not your average "non-con" story. This has a plausable plot line with a very vividly narrative and believable characters. I'm so enjoying this.
One thing in this chapter - Em seems to automatically understand that Jenner lied about Edrich wanting her beaten; how did that come about?
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis story had me gripped right from the beginning,loved each and every part of it,the sequence of events fits in perfectly,thanks for sharing and keep writing more,i surely will not miss any of your works henceforth :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis was absolutely fantastic. It's like Game of Thrones with its gritty medieval setting, political intrigue, and semi-dysfunctional romance. I absolutely love that you've placed as much emphasis on the LIT as you have on the EROTICA. Only wish is for more thorough spellcheck; that stuff breaks the magic a bit. Wish I could type more praise but typing from a phone.
claireacquiredalmost 12 years agoI just found your story and read the whole thing through. It was fabulous! I can hardly wait until the next chapter is written.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoYou never fail to keep your readers hanging - in a good way though! Keep it up!
