All Comments on 'Claire Gets Sent To "The Office"'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The variations on teacher:student fantasy are usually highly erotic unfortunately this one just came across as a straightforward non erotic rape, I read him as being angry and psychotic. There’s a vast difference between non consent and reluctance. I’m not trying to kink shame (far from it, promise!), even if it seems like it. You left a lot of info off the Tags, by emphasising the catholic schoolgirl (= no contraception) trope pushed this towards a “breeder” type of story. For me that’s a massive turn off. (Again that’s my problem not yours or anyone else’s)

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story but maybe the principal should cane dirty girls?

sirsgoodgirlinwhitepantiessirsgoodgirlinwhitepantiesabout 8 years ago
i want to get sent to your office too

So hot, made me dripping wet...

cookiesissyboycookiesissyboyover 9 years ago
Wawawewow

Yes, raging boner the whole way thru, please write more, I agree with other readers, if you can't separate non consent from reality your just an ignorant fucktard!

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 10 years ago

Safe comment:very good....

Naughty comment: *quivering under force of orgasm

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WWEEEETTTTTTTT!!!!!!;;

Oh my god that was amazing one of the best I've read so far and trust me it had me so wet I wad on the verge of coming.... Hope you write alot more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great story

I was soaking wet, really good story and I hope you continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Made Me Really Wet

OMG. That was so hot!!! I want a man to take me like that!!

honeydew4uhoneydew4ualmost 13 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed this story. It is one of my favourites. But you need to work on your sentence structure.

Keep up the good work!

jazz13jazz13over 14 years ago
awesome!

love ur stories! keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WOW

I lovvvvvved it!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow

I came three times reading your story. And bit my lip so hard it bled. More, please more.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12almost 16 years ago
mm

wonderful story! strangely enough, i'm working on a story just like this one. hopefully i'll see more!

and if you don't like these kind of stories, pressing the alt + f4 keys works wonders ;)

ThreaseThreasealmost 16 years ago
pretty good

Not bad, keep workin at it! :)

P.S. Stupid people who don't like reading/hearing about rape should stop reading non-consent stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good story

I never can understand why people who aren't intrigued or aroused by non-consent/reluctance stories read them. Ces't la vie.

I thought this was a good story, although I would recommend getting an editor to help you with sentence structure etc. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Damn!!

I almost came myself!!! That was a damn good story!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
One hot story

This story is really hot!!!Please continue and write more.

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
My favorite

part was the breathing on her and her reaction to it. Keep writing!

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