by ostinatobravado
The variations on teacher:student fantasy are usually highly erotic unfortunately this one just came across as a straightforward non erotic rape, I read him as being angry and psychotic. There’s a vast difference between non consent and reluctance. I’m not trying to kink shame (far from it, promise!), even if it seems like it. You left a lot of info off the Tags, by emphasising the catholic schoolgirl (= no contraception) trope pushed this towards a “breeder” type of story. For me that’s a massive turn off. (Again that’s my problem not yours or anyone else’s)
Best of luck with your writing
Tess (uk)
So hot, made me dripping wet...
Yes, raging boner the whole way thru, please write more, I agree with other readers, if you can't separate non consent from reality your just an ignorant fucktard!
Safe comment:very good....
Naughty comment: *quivering under force of orgasm
Oh my god that was amazing one of the best I've read so far and trust me it had me so wet I wad on the verge of coming.... Hope you write alot more
I was soaking wet, really good story and I hope you continue writing.
OMG. That was so hot!!! I want a man to take me like that!!
I really enjoyed this story. It is one of my favourites. But you need to work on your sentence structure.
Keep up the good work!
I came three times reading your story. And bit my lip so hard it bled. More, please more.
wonderful story! strangely enough, i'm working on a story just like this one. hopefully i'll see more!
and if you don't like these kind of stories, pressing the alt + f4 keys works wonders ;)
Not bad, keep workin at it! :)
P.S. Stupid people who don't like reading/hearing about rape should stop reading non-consent stories.
I never can understand why people who aren't intrigued or aroused by non-consent/reluctance stories read them. Ces't la vie.
I thought this was a good story, although I would recommend getting an editor to help you with sentence structure etc. Keep it up!
part was the breathing on her and her reaction to it. Keep writing!