All Comments on 'Claire, The Unknown Redhead Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
a good story

This could, and probably should have been, one story. It's one episode broken into two parts, unnecessarily to my mind. But don't take it that it's not good writing or not inspiring, it is. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to another.

themightyhoodthemightyhoodabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you. I did consider putting it all together as one, probably should have in hindsight. Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it

coolpencoolpenabout 6 years ago
Hot

I've always had a thing for red heads so you started with an advantage but the story was well written with good sex descriptions. Probably just one story here but I'd like to know how the relationship evolves. More please.

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