by professor_shadow
I liked the story in general but found his usage of " gonna" very out of character, admittedly I've just met the man but his stern manner and precise explanation of his intent does not fit with " gonna", if he is being succinct and explicit as his manner indicates then his language needs to do so as well, IMHO.
Other than that, a very nice start.
I enjoyed the story also but since Claire will be punished it seems in her most sensitive areas of her body will she also have to be groomed accordingly?