All Comments on 'Clans of Luteri Bk. 02 Ch. 08-End'

That was just an absolutely fantastic series. Im excited to see what you come up with next!

I absolutely love this story and hope you give us a book 3, you are an amazing writer!

excellent story, harp! thanks for sharing this with us

Your work is excellent it was so easy to fall into the characters that I now hate to leave them. The arrival of Jaime, Margaret, Trevin and most of all Lenore added some fun at the end. Ruthe and Helene, those two were preordained, another strong link between the clans. As far as Kane and Aslin what a pleasant surprise that the anticipated birth was a foal and not the predictable outcome of a child. Aslin’s absence from the arrival of Jaime and his entourage certainly set the stage for an anticipated motherhood. Just a final indication of your thoughtfulness at using small twists, delightful asides, “she is still a little upset with me that I would not restart the feud on her horse's behalf,” and clever phrases, "There's watching you and there's dead,” to keep the reader engaged.

Your readership is enormous which I hope gives you comfort in the breadth of appreciation out there for your work. Bellie444, we owe her a debt for her guidance in getting you to continue publishing on this site. I agree, she is an excellent author and well worth gaining familiarity by reading some of her completed work.

Who would have thought, you are a romantic at heart.

Wonderful story, well-written and literate! It was such a pleasure to read. I hope that you will continue to write. Thank you.

This is the best story! This and the Vanata really are some of my very favorites anywhere. Not just this site.

Loved it, brought me to tears at times. You are gifted, I look forward to your next story.

Wonderful, amazing, please write more such stories (just without the beatings).

One can only hope that the series continue with stories of Ruthe and Helene....

The best story I have ever read here. Thank vey much for sharing your stories with us.

I loved it, it was so well written and entertaining. After the first chapter I was hooked.

Love this story so fucking much. Just.... Amazing. Unbelievably amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us! (and thanks bellie44 for convincing you to!) If you want to give us more of your stories I'd be ever so grateful. :)

I love reading this and am a lil heartbroken it's over. Thank you so much for your gift!

This was such a wonderful story!! I’ve spent the last few weeks continuously refreshing this site for the next chapters because it was so addicting to immerse myself in this world through your words. If I could have an entire book of Kane-Ruthe interactions I would die of happiness.

I also like the cheeky mention of the Siblin :) I’m definitely more inclined to read the book now that I’m so invested in this world

Is it too soon to ask for a one-shot with Ruthe and Helene? LOL

But in all seriousness, thank you so much for sharing and continuing even when things weren't too promising. You have a great gift and I know we all look forward to reading more from you!

Thanks so much for sharing the gift of your writing, just loved my time in your world

Fantastic. I absolutely loved it. Thank you so very much for putting in all the hard work and effort of writing this wonderful story with beautiful character descriptions and settings. I actually thought Aslin was not able to ride to greet Jamie because she had given birth 🙂. Anyway I am really looking forward to the next story you post.

absolutely brilliant.. I am so glad you released so quickly, because I binge read the last two stories just then. great characters, great story, very well thought out, emotive(! I did in fact get teary eyed at points) and whilst it moved away from non con a while back, it had such a great hook that I absolutely had to see it through. I will be following to see what else you release!

my only criticism, if you could even call it that, is that you tend to resolve any conflict almost immediately - like when the oath closed because kane couldnt control his hatred; it seemed like a big deal and then it was fine within a minute with very little work. it deflated all the tension and lowered the stakes. I think drawing it out these sources of tension and making us work for them will take the storytelling from excellent to exemplary.

but overall, you're in my top 3 on this site and I cannot wait to see what you produce in the future!

Awesome story that could easily be a book. This was an excellent read and one I waited for for each update. Keep up the writing. Highly enjoyable

Absolutely loved coming back for a ‘lil more every night for the past week! Thank you for such a beautiful story!

This is officially my favorite story on here. I reread a some paragraphs several times because they were so well written that they gave me chills. Love the story, the premise, the characters, the damn horses, and everything else. Fantastic.

Now do it again please.

Beautiful story!! Loved the happy ending. I am sooooo intrigued by Ruthe and Helenes love story. Their dynamic is very interesting due to their past. I can only hope but I would love to see a short story on their relationship, specially the beginning stages where they have to get past Helenes feelings of anger and sadness over Ruthe killing her friend, and eventually falling in love with him.

Wonderful story. Such a rich tapestry of delightfully complex characters. Life is both beautiful and messy, and you have captured that magnificently here. My heart is full. So very grateful for your generosity, sharing this gem here. ❤️❤️❤️

This story made me so incredibly happy. Thank you for sharing you worlds with us. You are the absolute best.

A fabulous story! But is Aslin pregnant too? What was the purpose of Shai taking over her body, if not for that? And who did Ruthe breed Ilian with?

I could use another few chapters but am happy with the conclusion as well. Thanks for writing!

I'm sad the story ends here. Is Aslin pregnant? And Ruthe and Helene oathes in a month? So many details we need to know about. To me the ending seems a little rushed. You could bring this story so much further. More about their life together and how both clans need to learn to be allies instead of longtime enemies. But with that said it is one of my favorite stories on Lit.

Thank you for another wonderful series! I couldn’t help but binge read this one over the past few days :)

I am sad to see this one end. I would love more about all of the character's futures, particularly Helene and Ruthe. The had a special heat between them and I'd love to read about how he convinced her to accept his oath. Absolutely have loved this series. 💙

This was a really well done series. One of the best I've read on Literotica. I think there is a lot of openings for expanding this "world" and going into other characters.

Thank you for posting The Siblin and the Siren on Literotica! But what is wrong with this site? I can neither rate that story nor comment on it!

Brilliant! I Love your writing, I’m so glad that you decided to go ahead and submit this story. Like everyone else (it would appear) I’d love to read more on this storyline. I’ll be sure to keep checking for anything else you write, regardless of what it is.

Thank you again for sharing your stories, it’s appreciated.

Tess (UK)

Christ. Every one of your stories is about destroying a poor virgin and a dude or dudes with magical dicks.

Wow wow wow I am so pleased I stumbled on this series! It would make a great tv series I believe ! I would love to watch this on tv!

THANK YOU for this story. It was beautifully written

Please write a series with Ruthe and Helene!! They have so much chemistry between them! Like the other commenter said, I really want to read about how he convinced her to accept his oath.

I absolutely loved this story and all the wonderful characters you created! In fact, I loved it so much I am hoping you will write a sequel... a nice long sequel! Thanks again for sharing your time and talent. Oh, by the by... ringing is making a circle... wringing is what one does to remove excess water from a cloth. Not bad considering you made so very few errors. 5 stars through out, and fav story as well.

Really enjoyed this, thanks for your lovely writing

Phenomenal story! The whole Luteri series was so delightful that I barely got any sleep last night and started right back this morning. Not only was it fabulously sexy, but it was rich and compelling. I love your worldbuilding and your characters. I'm sure I'm not the first to hope for another series with Ruthe and Helene--perhaps how they courted despite everything. Or, like the Siblin and the Siren, more in this world. (Or ideally both!)

Fan-freakin'-tastic!!! Totally sucked me in and "forced" me to binge read it. Great story, awesome characters and an all around enjoyable story.

Please keep doin' the voodoo that you do so well!

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Couldn't have said it better. I share their sentiments entirely. Complete with the all-night reading.

Wow, I loved this so much. I am just amazed at your talent, your world building, and your characters. I confess I have never bought erotica before because it could be embarrassing if anyone found out about my purchase (it’s an irrational fear of mine). But. I would absolutely buy your stories, no second guessing. I also absolutely love how you contrast the sexual liberation of the Luterians with the modesty of the Alverians, and promote healthy and upfront sexuality and empowerment in your work.

Excellent, wonderful storyline. I cannot wait to read more like this. You have a gift of writing that should be shared often.

I started this just looking for kinky smut... Instead I found a cast and world I adore and absolutely want more of (and I don't even do weresmut usually...). Thank you for shari g these people and their lives with us...

I enjoyed the whole story very much, and would be delighted if you were to add another book. The charters are extremely interesting, and the plot is very exciting!!! Please consider doing so! 5 stars and favorite author throughout!

This is the first story of your's that I've read and was blown away. Bravo for writing a truly exceptional tale with such poignant dialogue throughout! One area I would have liked a deeper dive on was the "bond". Whilst I was able to grasp the general aspects of it's function from this story, it would have been helpful to know more on it's origins and relevance (maybe it's just because I'm historically more of a vampire person and less familiar with werewolf lore) - why were so few Luterians bonded with their oaths? Which leads me to my next thought - I see folks are wanting a Helene/Ruthe sequel but have you considered writing any origin stories on the Clans of Luteri? It certainly seems you have a lot of great material to work with...just a thought :)

Loved it!! Thank you for a wonderful story. Also, I would love to read more :]

"I am dead." "I am dead and I have gone to the place where the Alverian sky god tortures evil men for eternity."

LOL!!! I so love your writing! Five stars!

Absolutely love all of your stories!!! Thank you so much for sharing! I always end up completely binging them and I can’t get enough. A perfect blend of everything.

This is the third time I've read this story - it's that awesome!

Please say that there is more to Clans of Luteri? An origins story or the future of a united clan - or an offshoot story...something- anything!

Beautiful world building. So very good. I enjoyed every moment. Are you published? How do I find and purchase your work?

I like all the others loved this story and the great characters. I wish you would write a follow up as there are so many unanswered questions. What was the significance of “Shai’s blessing” in the cave. That event whilst it had meaning in in the cave seems insignificant now. What was the point of writing about it and then not developing it further?

Regardless, I really enjoy your writing.

Damn you're good - 5 stars!

Like everyone else, I want more. This lends itself very easily to a series. The results from what happened in the cave? A child?

Even better the second time around. I'll give it a year and then bathe in it again. Just wonderful

I thoroughly enjoyed this story! You create suspense, surprises, and magic. I didn't want it to end. (The sex is good, too.😉)