All Comments on 'Clarissa, Master's Wife, Worker's Whore'

by abroadsword

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ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 11 years ago
Their relationship

makes sense, though I can't be sure it makes common sense. A beautifully written story, a clever ending and, at least, food for thought. Abroadsword, please continue with your story writing, your talent requires it.

GingerVyeGingerVyeover 11 years ago
very entertaining

At first I was annoyed by the run-on sentences, then I got into the swing of it and see it is your unique style. I enjoyed the rhythm it created.

Original story, fantastic detail!

John is a humorous character, and Clarissa also made me smile. (At one point you called her Camilla)

I would've liked it better if she had orgasms too.

I liked Brabbinger too. You could flesh out his character.

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