All Comments on 'Classroom Coercion Ch. 01'

I can't wait to hear the secret. I also hope she gets pregnant from him cumming deep inside her.

But the sex scenes leave MUCH to be desired.

You grabbed her breasts? Why not tease them first? What did they feel like? How did she react when you felt them? Squeezed them? Toyed with her nipples?

Etc.

I am a sucker for the lost bet stories and this didn’t disappoint. Roll on two

"She glared up at me, her eyes full of anger but I wasn't too concerned about that. I was more focused on her taut breasts protruding from her arched back."

I always thought tits were on the chest!

I can't wait to hear the secret also wonder who loses the next bet or will she lose the next one on purpose

For me at least.

I want the slave's thoughts not the Master's, nor the actions.

I want her POV.

This is the start of a good story cannot wait for more .

We need to discover why her life would be ruined.

Please keep going.

I'm guessing English isn't your first language. It's a good idea but you need an editor but I read it all the way through and gave it 4 stars

Well written and quite original! Looking for the continuation.

I love this. Please continue the story

Love this style of writing, keep going

I add my voice to the call for more chapters. Although perfect grammar is nice, language is for communication and you communicated this story wonderfully. So much so that any errors were hardly speed bumps in this excellent tale, I did not even notice the one mentioned above, understanding the breast were jetting out because of the arching back, not on it.

To be fair I concur with the earlier commenter that a bit more descriptive action would help and be appreciated. It was jarring when he came in the very next sentence after entering her. This was after he already had her prime the pump with the BJ. Plus other details like measurements, hair color and how many competitive future slaves are in this group.

Well done and thank you for this gift.

Perfect, 5 stars. More chapters please!

Loved this and await for the series to continue because you left us hanging...lol.

Very good start, need more details during the spanking so we can feel her pain. Obviously you have decided to give up writing which is a real shame because the story line could go a long way. Hopefully you are ok

Any chance of another chapter? This is amazing but is just getting interesting.

I hope you write more to finish the story