by xpc316e
You have set the hook, now reel us all in; next chapter soon!
to offer a helping hand--or in this case, a helping cock.
When asked by a young virgin if you'd be willing to help lose her hymen, is it impolite to say "No?"
First of all: you need an editor. TAUT is 'tight', TAUGHT is the past tense of 'teach'. And it's AREOLA, not aureole, which is light like a halo.
Then, the sex happens too fast. No shyness. No I don't know what to do. No do you like this? No looking. No kissing or oral stimulation. No do you like it better this way or this way?
I gave it three stars, mostly for potential. The concept was good, but it really lacked eroticism.