All Comments on 'Claudia's Lessons'

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barepussloverbarepussloverover 10 years ago
Most Excellent!!

You have set the hook, now reel us all in; next chapter soon!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 10 years ago
So good of you...

to offer a helping hand--or in this case, a helping cock.

When asked by a young virgin if you'd be willing to help lose her hymen, is it impolite to say "No?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Meh!

First of all: you need an editor. TAUT is 'tight', TAUGHT is the past tense of 'teach'. And it's AREOLA, not aureole, which is light like a halo.

Then, the sex happens too fast. No shyness. No I don't know what to do. No do you like this? No looking. No kissing or oral stimulation. No do you like it better this way or this way?

I gave it three stars, mostly for potential. The concept was good, but it really lacked eroticism.

OleguyOleguyover 10 years ago
Worth more.

You gave us a dreamed of experience. Wish I had been so lucky.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

tell me more !!!!

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