All Comments on 'Claustrophobic Climaxing'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You can’t end it that way! There’s got to be another chapter!

BarnengBarnengover 2 years ago

you got to continue this

sharonpalmettosharonpalmettoover 2 years ago

Very nice!!!! I would love to see a Chapter 2.

FamilyGuy66FamilyGuy66over 2 years ago

Nicely done, particularly for a first published story. Good pacing, nice descriptive language. Sexy! I really hope to see a follow-up. The abrupt ending left me, like Mariah and Chelsea, craving more.

Rainyday493Rainyday493over 2 years ago

Loving this, next, please, more ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good start to what I’m sure many here hope will be many more chapters about the love/hate relationship between Mariah and Chelsea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

First story! Awesome dude! You simply must continue. And if you have other ideas floating in your head, put them on paper. You definitely have talent. Five.

Jedd

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow. I feel almost as frustrated as Chelsea.

MOAR!

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963over 2 years ago

Very well written. Great character development and I hope there is a part 2 Very soon.

CharmlesCharmlesover 2 years ago

I know how Chelsea feel... you really leave it here? I was about to cum!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What the f$#@ was I reading? I feel shame because I know same sex stuff is a perversion and affront to nature..but as a male picturing two women going at it..it's arousing. My emotions battle with my morals, rationalizing over this turmoil only leads to more dissent. For I realize, temptation is a force to be reckoned with. If I ever do go down I hope my humanity in the past is enough to cancel out this corruption.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

SOOO WHERE TF IS PART TWO??????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Anon who posted the religous bullshit comment, respectively, go suck your sky daddy's dick

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

1.Yeah a catharsis on the comment section is not the best place.

2.No need for insults.

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