All Comments on 'Cleaning Service'

When are authors going to learn and realize that "..." isn't a pause, in good well written material and from grade school the coma(,) serves this function.

I enjoyed it!! This is coming from a published author...keep writing...i like your style and please ignore the negative comments.

I haven't read a story in a very long time that involves the woman denying the MAN. I enjoyed this partly because I know what is coming---punishment. She was very bad, which is very good because it means punishment. I hope he can deliver a good one.

Oooh, how I wish I had a Lily to come home to!