All Comments on 'Clerical Terror'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 6 years ago
ok

I do not follow all of your stories, but this one I did not like too well even though it was written good, I am not into BDSM or non consent sex or into blackmailing either, but this is just me, I realize that this is just a story but everyone makes mistakes and I believe Quinn should not have been made to pay in that manner, but again this is just my opinion

GentlytwistedGentlytwistedabout 6 years ago
Another sterling performance

Good job!

tied26tied26about 6 years ago
Loved It!

I love tickling and BDSM stories, so this was already my kind of story, and it was really well written with a great plot. I hope you continue-I'd love to hear more!

AnonymousWriter244AnonymousWriter244about 6 years ago
That was smoky Smoky125

"To be continued"... Yes! I would like to read more of this (even thought I am not a BDSM fan). One thing is making me wonder... your heroine is so submisive, how the heck is she a would be rapist? Something smells fishy here. Framed maybe?

stroudlestroudlealmost 6 years ago
Kinky and fun

Miss bower really had Quinn in a fix in more ways than one. This a good reminder to be careful before you press send on a computer.

The tickling machine, Heeee heeee.

After all that I hope Quinn enjoyed her date. Im sure Miss Bower will be keeping an eye on Quinn to get her back in the cuffs at the next possible opportunity .

Well written and kinky as ever . I loved it .

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
chapter 2? (and 3,4,5, etc)

I loved this story, and I really hope you continue writing it.

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