by oneagainst
Hot damn! You can't leave us hanging like that. Can't wait for the next click-and-collect story.
I like that you're building an actual character arc for the people you write and that they occasionally pop up into each other's lives rather than having standalone stories build around one-off scenarios. I'll definitely be continuing to come back.
So this story didn't quite Grab me and shake me like C&C: Amie's Present did, but it was interesting, nonetheless.
I was REALLY surprised and happy to learn about the fate of Rebecca, because that nightmare was keeping me up at night. Lol 😆
So I'm glad I read it, and I agree with the others that Tom and Hayley have a very interesting dynamic that only gets more interesting with each installment.