by Extreme Bohunk
I wrote a story with a similar plot when I was in my early teens. I didn't like my story, because I wasn't able to give the detail. However, you did a great job doing what I couldn't. Good work and thank you for the goose bumps.
Rich language fully describes the actions and emotions of the characters.
Well done.
My computer on and off four times looking for that click here button to come up. Who's your ISP? All I can say is damn I wish I was her, you did great EB...as usual. What more can be said, you are my hero...
This was pure delight. I hope to read more of your stories.