All Comments on 'Cliff View...the Story Continues'

by Westman99

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adegeromeadegeromeabout 2 years ago

Superb story. Excellent, clear plot development without bogging on superfluous detail. Good, believable character development. Erotic without being an industrial training manual. A few typos but so what? Bravo. Brava. Whoever you are.

clearcreekclearcreekalmost 2 years ago

Glad to have a story with a gentleman. All had fun. 5

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English Male...mature. Late 60's. I have been in two long term relationships but am now single. I have three adult children. I have been reading stories on here for a while and thought I would have a look around. Recently tried my hand at writing....happy for you to give const...