Superb story. Excellent, clear plot development without bogging on superfluous detail. Good, believable character development. Erotic without being an industrial training manual. A few typos but so what? Bravo. Brava. Whoever you are.
English Male...mature. Late 60's. I have been in two long term relationships but am now single. I have three adult children. I have been reading stories on here for a while and thought I would have a look around. Recently tried my hand at writing....happy for you to give const...