All Comments on 'Clinical Trials Ch. 01'

by KegRoller

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A fantastic start.

I hope the treatment actually makes her more fertile rather than less, it would be great to see her get knocked up during these trials. A great story I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wonderful

Keep it going, I'm hooked on what happens next.

jrmmjrmmover 8 years ago
more please!!

I have to know what happens next, hurry!

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204over 8 years ago
Very interesting.

Has Brittney been genetically modified to be permanently childless as well as STD immune? Is she being genetically modified to become the perfect nymphomaniac? How can I enroll for the clinical trial to test her orgasmic responsiveness?

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 8 years ago
love it!

Love the way this story is going. Shame that it took so much effort to get the nanos on her. Would be a great base for a story if being "nanoed" was so simple it could happen by accident.

wdbtchrwdbtchrover 8 years ago
Strange but very interesting

I'm very curious to see where this is going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keg-roller has come up with another fascinating scenario

Keg-roller has come up with another fascinating scenario

Some authors are blessed with the gift of describing events in a way that keeps the reader interested. K-R is blessed with that gift. Plus he has the ability to progressively add eroticism which makes the story even more interesting. Job well done, Job well done indeed.

liz33ndliz33ndover 6 years ago
exciting start

I like your writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

It has right amount of reluctance and forcefulness. Good suspense. 5 stars.

shysuzyshysuzyover 3 years ago
Fabulous

Exactly the right mix of reluctance and compulsion this is such a hot story - I wish I'd found it ages ago...

TrstxxxTrstxxxalmost 3 years ago

I bet Brittney won’t follow the rules...and the consequences? 😈

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