All Comments on 'Closed Books'

Congratulations on your first story on Lit. I sought it out from reading the AH Thread. Not really my cup of team but well written, good use of language and nicely balanced construction. Hope you do well.

neonlyte

An excellent story that teaches us the necessity for open, honest communication within any relationship, BDSM or otherwise. Well written with nary a spelling or grammatical error. I would suggest that he would have had bleeding gashes if she had hit him with the cane full force, Canes are mean! Be careful using one. Five stars nevertheless.