All Comments on 'Closed Doors Ep. 01'

Very enjoyable. Be mindful of POV switches between characters on the fly. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

This story has endless possibilities. I look forward to reading more..........

if there a relationship between father and daugther, need o be one mother and son and not to take all the acion the father

The usual. Learn the difference, plz. kthx.

greart start to this first part of the story. can't wait to read the next parts.

For a starting chapter, and with the quick descriptions, it was pretty hot.

Great start, going on to read the rest.

Are you as big a dick tease as you are a writer? I hope so! :)

You write so well. And I hope that whomever your lover is gets his/her brains fucked out at least daily---so they can experience your perfectly sexual brain!