by zooeyaudrey
You write so well. And I hope that whomever your lover is gets his/her brains fucked out at least daily---so they can experience your perfectly sexual brain!
Are you as big a dick tease as you are a writer? I hope so! :)
For a starting chapter, and with the quick descriptions, it was pretty hot.
Great start, going on to read the rest.
greart start to this first part of the story. can't wait to read the next parts.
if there a relationship between father and daugther, need o be one mother and son and not to take all the acion the father
This story has endless possibilities. I look forward to reading more..........
Very enjoyable. Be mindful of POV switches between characters on the fly. Otherwise, keep up the good work.