All Comments on 'Closer'

Somewhat believable

This story was originally written for a friend of mine. The perspective change is intentional, done at a moment in the writing to enhance the intimacy of the situation. To make her (the reader) feel as if Im speaking to her at that moment. I apologize if it confuses the general public, and hope you can enjoy it nonetheless.

Amazing attention to detail. You capture the eroticism. Needs more furries, however.

The drama continues with Ashley and Kaylee in this excellent new chapter.